Raven Wolf

Raven Wolf Chapter 02 Page 13

Date Posted: December 28th, 2011, 6:07 pm

Author Notes

Nope, I have not forgotten about the comic =) just took a break for holidays, I'll probably work on this on Sat and Sun to catch up on Monday and Tuesday's pages, we'll see how things turn out.

This is the last page depicting the vision, we're back in the military labs after this page.

Comments

Good, good. What an interesting dream. Now to the reaction. :D Watch them freak and panic!
Awesome. So far, I love it. You already have and interesting plot with different elements within it which will, I hope, certainly pop up later in the story. Especially this 'element' thing. I look forward to finding out who the other four are. (Don't want to be a spoiler so I won't mention the other one mentioned in your novel.)

Also, if you ever need a hand at editing, I'd be glad to help you.
I'm commenting on something that's a bit out of my element, so bare with me. Like the comic, overall, but speaking from experience, adding premonitions to any story destroys most avenues for a good story. For your sake, I hope your good at planning ahead.